- takenotes properly
- Lack of terminology (protaganist/antagonist/werisimiltude/realism etc)
- Waffling
- too long opening paragraphs
- Did not stae if the representation was stereotypical
- Not enough spesific examples
- to much discussion baout how how immigratants are treated in society (not needed)
- Arguments weren't strong enough, use Marco 9audience, genre, narrative and representation)
- No mention of Binary opposition, Todorov's narrative theory
- Jump cuts
Wednesday, 14 December 2011
Section A review
Common errors
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